Peer assessment
My peers said the the title is very good and has a good indie feel to it and they recognised the metaphor behind the title straight away. Another positive comment that my peers made was that the contents page looked very well laid out, clear and easy to read. They said it will allow them to navigate around the magazine with ease and find an article that interests them quickly. My peers also said that the genre of the magazine is easily recognisable because of the colour and the vibe the magazine gives. I also received positive reviews on my double page spread with people liking the positioning of the models and saying the article is also well laid out and will be easy to read.
Improvements
Some improvements my peers suggested was that i could space the sell lines on my front cover out more because some said that my magazine front cover looked to basic because all the sell lines are in the same place and too squashed together in one place. Another point my peer made was that the the models on the front cover could be positioned better and have different facial expressions instead of blank to show the band members individual personalities. I have took these suggestions and board and will work on improving in these areas.
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